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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Lead and not ink Brainless tuggling struggle Puke up my earlier meal Puke, let it stink Hunched, flat, and laid over Worriless about a flower Make a stand in cower Worriless about a flower Energetic head flow sharp intact Wicked chaos gasp for breath Indwell I take back Hatred lost in groan of death Steaming skull topple over Inhale a worthless flower Strapped and broke now to cower Exhale that very same flower Where does our sun go? Consistent constant - just flow The direction Christ will know Listen - Watch - A seedling grow John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
Where does our sun go? Consistent constant - just flow The direction Christ will know Listen - Watch - A seedling grow wow terrific ending, vivid imagery throughout, great read New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you Jackal. I appreciate that. I've been reading alot of Emily Dickinson lately and basically just experimenting. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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