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Dark Poetry #4

Stoic at the Funeral

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2005-02-28 10:15 AM

The boy sits in his chair, watching.
With expectant, eyes surveying the crowd
Faces all around, solemn and drawn
Pretty faces, with big sad eyes like saucers
Wet cheeks, but he doesn’t know why
Still he waits as the dirge plays on
Wondering where his father has gone

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.
KuruShio (DeadlyBob)

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-02-28 05:52 PM

thats intense. I could feel myself there. Sort of hiding behind the brushes though.
ummmm...that picture is awesome. haha...

longte
Member

since 2005-04-06

Posts 199
Australia

2 posted 2005-04-07 04:26 AM

Truthfull and Evocative

Live It

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2005-04-07 04:28 AM

so sad.

tore me apart

amazing last line.

intensely depressing

sound like you?

love and empathy

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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