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Im empty inside |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England 
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Im empty inside since the day you left Wondering when time will heal your wounds And you will come back to the animal that hurt you It never meant to happen it just got carried away You knew how strong the beast could be Yet you insisted on never leaving And now your hurt and its all my fault Because the beast was never tamed The wild animal inside I have hurt you I have lost you And your wounds will never heal. The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Short and sweet. Pretty cool. Wild animals as human beings. empty inside raw humanity. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, I loved it. I don't want to analyse, but I simply enjoyed it. Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
And now your hurt and its all my fault Because the beast was never tamed Ahh...."The Beast" that we all know inside of us can never actually BE tamed, not my beast anyways....Great Write... "Trina" Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Cheryl, this resides in all of us, unfortunately. I can relate. |
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