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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I’m a man In this cloud Is the sky real Does water really exist? Alive, but do I live Given, do I give Someone else made me live Trapped by the give Can feel my brain That thing I, just supposed to do Relentless burnings try to fly Verbal spirit, anchors holding thy Push it in Focus Flip, seesaw Tilt past the murdering law Loosen with ferocious pinch Flaming center stomach crinch Is it fair I long to die? Would you dare watch, cry? Cry many wet thick harsh Indeed moistures mass As full as blood Remnant sadden of my stench My rotting corpse caught in eye Heart shredding, this hook in thy Don’t fidget with fear of me Sigh of me, be merry Free from love, the dreadful pain Let my lips - pale with chill- refrain Gone from beneath delight beauty game Trance strict stare... honest Stump, still a stump Never as a tree Damned from growth The sheerer of the tree This path does connect Is ONLY me Apart from the world Christ that blinds death to see Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
ok, i got some of this and other parts were totally lost to me. nonetheless i got the basic essence of this is harsh and beautiful at the same time. so...hmm...i still like it? lol. - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah I've been reading Emily Dickinson lately which has inspired some experimentation. I can see maybe I need to work at it a little, or maybe this is exactly as it needs to be. And in answer to your question, Yes, you do like it. lol. la la yup. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I Was A Lil Lost Too, But I Still Liked It As Well "Trina" Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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