Why am i afraid of the dark?

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Dark Poetry #4

Why am i afraid of the dark?

NightFall
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since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

0 posted 2005-02-24 03:14 PM

Am i afraid of the dark because your not with me?
Am i afraid of the dark because i am alone?
I am not afraid of the light in the night
But when the candles dim
And the light seems ever so thin
Why then am i afraid of the dark?

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-02-25 02:05 PM

its a bit repeatitive.
but...
The point gets across.
perhaps elaborate.

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

2 posted 2005-02-27 04:48 PM

I dont actually like this poem, a friend posted it without me knowing. It really needs some work, its not even complete.
NightFall

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

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