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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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0 posted 2005-02-21 01:01 PM


Dancing and skipping,
Always singing a happy tune together.
you seemed like the one, like you were different.
You weren't like all the rest, you were special.

Well, Yeah right!
I know you, I found who you really are.
You are one of them, another one to betray,
hurt, lie, and leave as quick as you found me.

Just like a snake you slither on your belly,
sneak up to your prey and release the venom.
Such a foul way to break it to me.

You are probably worse than the rest!
Your beautiful disguising wings, shielded my eyes.
I didn't see, I did not see the evil.
I saw an angel, to save me.. But he always said there isn't a feminine figure in his hole in the sky.

You rendered me unconscious to your ways,
I was subliminal. I was lethargic under your power.
Such a dirty lie you provoked unto me.

Don't ever think I will come back, no it won't happen.  I am through. I am done!  I have had enough of your torment, I have had enough of weeping my emotions onto a pillow. I have had enough, I have had enough!

You have done nothing but fool me into an abyss of madness, confusion, sadness, and stress.  Your not worth it! I don't know what to do.  Oppressing my mind, you have done in a timely manner.

Thanks for all the lies, and all the hurt.  You have left me no choice, but to erase your memory from my head.  
Thanks for being such an "awesome" best friend to me...

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-02-28 05:48 PM


But he always said there isn't a feminine figure in his hole in the sky.

That's the only part that really stuck out to me. but...
wow.
I could feel the intensity and pain in this one.

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