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vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2005-02-19 08:55 PM



Sorry,
such a small word,
with such a big impact,
enough to
melt tender hearts,
and bring out sharp knives.

Most would think,
it would be, a
healing word, apologizing
for the hurt that was caused.
But sorry reopens your wounds.

Though sorry will never compare,
to good bye.

I'm sorry.
Good bye

I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow.

© Copyright 2005 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2005-02-20 12:57 PM


so true. couldnt be more honest

sorry, good bye.

an alright poem. seen a lot better from you but still, u r writing so its more than what im doing!

laura

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

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