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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110


0 posted 2005-02-16 11:47 PM



a boy sits in the corner
trying to hide from the light
encompasing him so completely
but he has found the escape he needs
his fists clenched
at his sides so tight
that a red pool formed by drips
is all beneath him
the light can no longer hurt him
the pain of its brilliance no longer seethes
the dark is always there to comfort him
in the corner, with empty sockets, he bleeds

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-02-17 01:41 AM


Secret voices fast and quiet.  Why do people trust these?

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

NightFall
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since 2004-01-28
Posts 88
The land known as England
2 posted 2005-02-17 11:21 AM


very cool and well written.
C.J

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2005-02-18 08:16 PM


Kuru,

extremely well written . . .

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
4 posted 2005-02-28 05:58 PM


there's an intense sadness in this. but still hope. comfort. well written.
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