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Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2005-02-13 09:57 PM



Paper clips will seal our lips
but we can never be the ones
we're meant to
aren't we supposed to?

Heavy handed
Hammer headed
I suppose forgetting how to breathe
is the method the machine
Built a home inside my head
A place to hide from the blaze of my own eyes
It doesn't matter how you swim
It's all waves and bloody fins
Heavy handed
hammer headed
To bring the hell inside of me
Twisted frame must
Twisted frame rusts the ending mind

Hello angel in the outer slim
I cry to see your simple skin
The way you glitter in the limb
Don't fall from
Don't fall for me
These tangle trumpets to blow your sin

Paper clips
But plastic ships
Sink the swimming
We're meant to
We must propose to end our burning sky
bleed the sugar silken boned and dry

© Copyright 2005 Ryan - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-02-14 12:00 PM


wow!
the flow to this is phenominal. I read it outloud and its just amazing.
haven't seen you in a while.
this was refreshing.
true talent.
I love that title too.

tecoyah
Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83
NY
2 posted 2005-02-15 09:38 AM


Truly different....I agree with the beauty of the flow.

Great to read

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