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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
chilled inferno Scorched by life my fire is swollen by engulfing yours tasting wisps of furious blue sampling white heat by the gale licking such reds as your friction can deal pregnant flame, seeded by your furnace embers only remain,where once your blaze was banked you sooth my lungs such is your chilled inferno |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Like cigarettes. Pretty cool. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Indeed a "Cool" Write... "Trina" Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I must say, you are quite gifted. This is concrete, yet molten. |
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