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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-02-07 10:49 PM

Picture all the meat
Red and raw
Fresh and bloody
Even juicy
Some of it still moves
Screaming
Tears
Death

Keep it simple
Quiet
Concentrate
Open the ingredients one at a time
Pour it all in
And mix it up
Slips with the knives
Sharp rebuke and smite

Does it hurt to get cut
Does it hurt long
Do you feel it
Do you bleed
Become meat
Lets cook some of you
And mix with some of me

Try this meal
Add the flour
Make your bread
Mushrooms for seasoning
Your brain gets refocused
Strip your legs
Dancing in razors and fire
Starting to bleed
Hehehe

All this food makes you puggy
Little gooy
Do you slip away
It gets important here
Making
Impossible
Impregnable
This dead face brightens to a smile
You stay confused
Happy
It makes you happy
And we've become happy
Just happy
So lets be happy

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

1 posted 2005-02-08 08:20 AM

Ooh i like this one, but then i am a twisted individual. suddenly i feel a bit like Hannibal Lecter...

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2005-02-08 10:34 PM

wow really liked this one, so dark and twisted hehehe like me i guess.
made me feel glad im not a vegetarian lol

Does it hurt to get cut
Does it hurt long
Do you feel it
Do you bleed
Become meat
Lets cook some of you
And mix with some of me

that was my fave stanza

lovin ur stuff at the moment! its all wicked

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-02-09 12:49 PM

It wasn't meant to be wicked, but it does come off that way at a certain point of view. Thanks, now go get some meat... lol.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2005-02-10 01:35 AM

Oh cool. Juicy...mmmmm. Hannibal Lector, yes, Not-A-Vegan yes, but mainly hungry. Hungry for more. Lol, Did you have fun with this?

Hollow.
Courtney.

And the legacy runs from needles to guns
And no one's immune to the pain
From Marilyn to River Phoenix
From Elvis to Kurt Cobain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2005-02-10 01:42 AM

Actually this one came from probably the opposite, and yes I did have fun. Just squeezing out the juice.... lol

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

6 posted 2005-02-10 03:03 AM

awesome poem... very descriptive. imagery was great

laura

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2005-02-11 12:08 PM

I appreciate that.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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