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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm a blind god I'm so awesome and you'll never see it Piece of my head exlodes and see my debris Hear the crying and don't care Do I? Its eatting my face Blind Honor and fire brush through me I stand They'll never catch me Inhailling poison So great Art work at work inside my head, again The highs and lows Forgotten laws Lust for Egypt The pleasures Convinced of stupidity And suicide sits right near Their pullings on my soul pulling this way and that Must die Idiot Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn.... Craig, this is stellar! Your writing has grown immensely. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm. and the voices argue and they all lose. I always like your writing. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
DUDE! you've done it again! stop! lol. this one HAS to go on a record or something. it's just too cool not to like...sell. =) *add (duh) - Bon How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. Suicide is such a cruel trick. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Holy ... I embark upon a place Away from here For a few And you grow Into something stellar. I needed this tonite. Good job. Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you News. The way you guys respond makes me smile. So thanks again. And welcome back. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wooaah! that rocked dude. awesome stuff!! laura can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. I'm glad the people of New Zealand like my stuff. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
People in NY like your stuff as well. The first couple stanzas were somewhat jumbled but I very much enjoyed the way you brought them into focus as the meter changed. Inspired |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you tecoyah. Tell the people in NY to rock on. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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