»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
Wasn't I Suppposed To Be
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
Wasn't I Suppposed To Be |
|
|
teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I wasn't supposed to be angry was I also not supposed to care? how could you push me away and then pretend you wanted to be here? I know I'm not perfect who is? that's no reason to look at me as if I were a nonentity I want to be happy you don't even recognize me what use am i to you after you've broken me down to nothing I am the listless bruise useless and merely an annoyance I am nothing to you and you are what made me as I am I'm sorry if there's errors in this or if it just doesn't make sense. I'm just in a bit of a mood and have a need to write and noticed that it's been a while since I posted on here so I decided to post one poem here. But now I'm off to my real collection of poems. I think I'm going to be writing an awful lot tonight. |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Never apologise for expressing your thoughts or feelings. I enjoyed, you ask the pertinent questions and one suspects that you also hold the answers! "A spring shower was cause to run |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"how could you push me away and then pretend you wanted to be here?" Made perfect sense to me. And the lines above? I have lived that...they want their cake and eat it too...and what they deserve is not even a lick of frosting.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
||
|
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wow! i really enjoyed that! you're awesome, i can relate to your writing. post more! love it. laura can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
