Attraction in Imperfection

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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2005-01-31 06:22 PM

I get drawn to people
magnetic forces surge through
the air and draw me towards a
particular person.

I have no control over
the electrical currents slowly
binding me to that person
on first glance.
I simply surrender, and
listen to their instructions.

The boy has many imperfections,
too skinny, greasy hair,
but his blue eyes hold within
them, insurmountable amounts of needing.
His eyes, make your heart
skip those beats.

Attraction is a strange thing,
like love you have no control
over it.

A tall muscular boy stands
adjacent to the skinny one.
His face a chiseled sculpture,
every feature in splendid proportion.

His green eyes lock
onto yours,
but your eyes, drift
back to the blue ones.

Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-02-01 01:55 AM

Omg, I loved that one to death!!
*squee*
Jeez, I really loved that, I knew this was gonna be good from the first stanza so I knew I had to savour it. It was beautiful. Ah, jeez, this is the full truth. So was that poem, I can tell

Courts.

And the legacy runs from needles to guns
And no one's immune to the pain
From Marilyn to River Phoenix
From Elvis to Kurt Cobain

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2005-02-01 08:48 AM

this is soo true... and so beautiful... you know i love your writing.... and im jealous too.... your so good, creative and full of emotion....
keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2005-02-01 05:09 PM

well said.
extremely well said.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2005-03-09 06:15 AM

There's Always An Attraction To Someone with Needy Eyes...Usually A Good Attraction, Great Write

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

5 posted 2005-03-14 12:11 PM

nicely done, fun enjoyable read

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

6 posted 2005-03-14 03:44 AM

AHHHHHH LOVED IT

AHH SO TRUE AND REAL AND AWESOME

wicked write

l&e

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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