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cold and alone |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
i think ive done something wrong my life just keeps getting worse my one true love left me, cold and alone my life means nothing to me right now only because he has left me cold and alone my flower of love wilted meaningless and thrown aside when she came back to you leaving me cold and alone my one, my love you have no idea how much you have hurt, broken, ripped and torn apart the fragile soul i so willingly gave to you to look after, care for and gently heal you have rendered me dead left me with nothing left me cold and alone i really dont know where this has come from but obviously something i needed to get out of my system... let me know any thoughts on this and how it can be improved..... not really sure i like it..... live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
And yet here we are some time down the road. The flower shall bloom again! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
a nice purging of feelings. I hope you feel better. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Yea, I Hope You Feel Better Too, Great Write... "Trina" Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thanks very much for the replies... its much apreciated.. its not getting much better right now... and again i thankyou for all the kind words. Ruth |
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