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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2005-01-17 07:35 PM



Glass seizures
scattered
evenly
over
an
active
imagination

shear the surface
from my footsteps

while

Time damns
the fools
who cross
my path

&

Time
demands
her
sacrifice

a sliver
of what
will
never be

to haunt
reality.

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1 posted 2005-01-17 10:54 PM


Fluidity
seconds flowing
filling lungs
replacing sighs
with diluted cries

"Time demands
her sacrifice"

a willing victim

still
paralyzed,

within you.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-01-18 02:48 AM


Sometimes that sliver is the most amazing thing in the world though.  Beautiful poem.  

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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