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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-01-15 11:06 PM



You know what is sad,
When your true love is lost,
You can’t think anymore,
Nor can you speak,

For each thought you think,
She is all you see,
Each breath you take,
She is all you sense,

Tears flow tonight,
As they for her,
Every night-

My heart feels no love,
My soul no sanity,
And my lips-
Not your kiss,

I see you in my dreams,
And in my thoughts,
As if you are still there,
Just waiting for me,

Your smile leads me to heaven,
And your looks-
To your heart,

Why is it dark now?
When I need you the most,
To hold me and to love me,
And I promise to listen,
To be there for you my love.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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1 posted 2005-01-16 12:32 PM


No one can make you happy.  Its a choice.  Ignore what manipulates the spirit of depression and it leaves.  Its sometimes hard to do, but if you get a check from someone that is angry and calling you names and being as rude as possible, you still get a check.  She isn't part of you, just somewhat attatched.  

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

River
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2 posted 2005-01-16 01:28 AM


can I be one to disagree and say he will get over it and so will I because I'm going through the exact same thing? (exept with a guy...ok...I'm a girl) you can't just will yourself into not feeling bad. I had depression after I lost him too for like 6 months. and I still dream about him 2 years later. I still ache. you can't tell love what to do, it just happens. anyways, besides the subject, I really like the way you say this Xeonox, you pretty much took all the words from my heart. and I really hope you find true happiness someday.

           - River

"Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home

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