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Dark Poetry #4
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John B
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 68
Texas, USA
0 posted 2005-01-12 06:28 PM


clear blue skies i know this like the back of my hand
the burning sun and the whereabouts of a bathe
on my mind
is this me or this you
falling into deep depression at the sight of trip wire
it's begging me to come close
"use your feet, use your trust"
so i get up and walk a little further
to trip over
© Copyright 2005 John Nathan Booker - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-01-14 01:30 AM

That was cool.  It was weird.  It was like I could see straight into your head.  Like the poem was a window to your mind.  Thats cool.  

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.
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