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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
You ask if I'm ok You ask this day to day And everytime I answer You just get further ahead Because what can I do I can't turn to you Your my friend You will be there But this is pain I can not share This hurt that comes from deep within Feeds off all my insecurities Feeds off my pain Feeds off my fears Feeds off a broken girl Thats been left in tears Am I fat Am I ugly Am I stupid Was I wrong Am I ment to be alone Am I supposed to say so long Theres something on the inside Leading me into hell My dreams are haunted by memories I sleep with ghosts in bed My waking hours filled with dread So I live in my head What am I supposed to do I need to talk But words just float away Kitten, Stina, Chandra, Smash You ask if I'm ok I smile, say yes, and so you walk away... Please don't listen to what I say Sit me down Make me talk Don't let me faed away I have your answers But I need you to stay To look me in the eye I need to know it will be ok I have your answers Now I need mine As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Your poem is very touching, and I’m sure many people can relate to the feelings expressed here. I guess it’s because we don’t want to show our “imperfections” to the world, so, when asked “how are you?”, the mask comes on, and the pretending comes out. Our insecurities can become such a burden, and we wonder if anyone else feels as we do? Writing about that internal chaos can be a help, and so can knowing you are not alone.  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Its very brave to write saying that you need them to stop and actually listen. Very nicely written. BWA |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Is this about that girl you wrote about a few months ago? I'm willing to bet she knows what your answers are, but she also knows that if she doesn't give you answers it will make you weak to her. A form of control. The reason my ex-fiancee is my EX-fiancee. But that is cool that you posted this here. Its awesome. Its like you can actually see the battle going on in your head. You'll be fine. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
Thanks guys. I guess i just needed to let people know that im not as alright as they think i am. not nearly. i guess i just really need to talk sometimes. so thanks again for all your replies. Static As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them. |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
I liked this a lot.  |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
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