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Can't talk anymore
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Can't talk anymore |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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we can't talk anymore ours lips move but we can't hear whats being said we've lost the passion the trust the comfort we can't talk anymore bored eyes lost in our own selfish world wishing away each second while we talk about nothing and everything effortlessly we can't talk anymore what's the point? you have your life i have mine and even though we try or at least i do we can't even talk we can't talk anymore and it's all my fault you're the only one keeping me alive |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
It wasn't until I got here to edit this message that I feel the same and yet completely different. Instead of "we can't talk anymore" it's just "we can't talk" and something...I just can't talk to them. Arrrggghhh, maybe it's just time...What did someone who is totally the best in the world say to me once? Time is something we cannot keep, but can never erase, (miss two lines), Though we may lose time, or lose memories along the way, time and love and memories, stay with us everyday. What else did they say? Scream at your pain, Cry at your loss, Eat in your depression, Wave at your reflection. But as I said in my earlier message, there are two people in your poem's situation, not just you, so blame yourself not, my friend. Great poem by the way, really enjoyed it. Quote of the day: "Friends come in and out of your life as quickly as busboys in a resteraunt." - Stand By Me. Just simple old courtney. You just got to see me through another day My body's achin' and my time is at hand And I won't make it any other way |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
Courtney. Thank you so much for that. You feel the same? Good, at least its not just me, not just a personal thing. It was great seeing you again... lol wave at ur reflection.. ha im seein gyou do it now. hehe. love you LOR lOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
(edited-profanity-Ladycat) DUDE!!!! that was so awesome! ahh i loved it. it made me want to write again, but unfortunetly i don't write anymore. loved it to death! how could you ever put it down?! LOOOVVEEDDD ITT! lots of love, Kurst Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (12-14-2004 03:17 AM).] |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wow, I Liked That Alot, I Know What You Mean, And It Suxs Doesn't It, Whats The Point of Talking, If You Can't Get Through, Great Write  Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
im crying here im sure you can understand why.... but if you are having a slight memore laps I'll fill you in... me and bjorn...... you know what happened and yeah, we cant talk anymore. thank you for this. I hope you're coping, I have faith in you ha this reply is hopeless compared to courts' one, grr *shakes fist at Courts* why do you make my job so hard!!! love and empathy always sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow...this was amazing. I really loved this one so fricken much. It might just be my favorite...but there are so many to choose from...  I think i wil save this one and i can really relate to this...I am going through the same thing..ma nad this guy that i really love, yet hate at the same time..well, we dont talk anymore..we cant really. He has his life and i have myne now, and it hurts me..and yeah, im gonna stop while im ahead..lol and again..I loved it.Later.~karissa ~Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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