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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-12-10 02:11 AM



A puddle of me
And swabs of filth
Whats my view?
Do you understand?

You, fast, angered
Electric vibrate and choking blood
Where are you going?
What do you say?
Tell me your name

Silence

Are you a victim?
Or do you want to be?
Pretending in midst of your attacks
A folding hatered you yourself don't understand
As it rips limb and limb

You dangle
Scream
Open a front to destroy me
Resume beatting my slipping sliced juicy heart

Would you like a splash?
Holding your throat
Anger plus fear against self-control
I allow you to live
I'll never hurt you
Even if I die
And whatever your hate
(Like the rest)
I can't trade something
I'll only give

let God  ROAR,... in power...

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
stevebrklynnyc
Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
1 posted 2004-12-11 03:52 PM


I understand.  This was really gripping and pulled no punches.  I have to save this one.  Thanks.
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2004-12-11 11:35 PM


Wow, you're saving it.  I've given you somewhat of a stereotype of being a tough guy type and if your saving wow, thats a compliment.  Thanks.  Turns out this is actually a poem/letter to somebody that makes me nervous.  

-GIS

let God  ROAR,... in power...

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