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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-12-09 11:02 PM

her lips curve into a malicious smile
as she reels in her captive with her teasing eyes
he buckles with excitement and anticipation
that maybe, this time
its his turn
so he follows
and she lets him hold her hand
make him think he's in charge
while she gets ready to manipulate
and bring the man
to his knees
and then she's bored
and moves on
down the line of the desperate and the hungry
uses each one with the same attempt
to make them think they are in charge
until she reaches the end of the line
after using each and everyone
except one
and that is the one she wants the most
but he won't have her
and she doesn't know why
because everyone wants her
and she wants him with all the lust and malice
that every man in the line behind her had wanted her
but he won't have her
because he knows what shes like
and after all the teasing and playing she asks herself
was it worth it?

*long AND boring. sooo terribly sorry. just taking heed of my good friend courtney's advice to just try and write even though i'm finding it hard, cuz at least im writing. well there u go! btw this took sooooo long to write. a stupid vent.

you're the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-12-09 11:16 PM

nice vent

i enjoyed reading this

nice to see you back on the topic board

love and empathy always
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-12-09 11:39 PM

Basically a whore until she's been worn out, and then meets realization. I know someone with that story line, but it has a few differences. Not hopeless, just hurt.

-GIS

let God ROAR,... in power...

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-12-10 05:59 PM

Yay! You wrote! I liked it, it was not stupid at all! Too many exclamation marks (from me) but hey, it's a special day, and you must post more now you are back with a pen in your hand! I'll stop now. Nice ending, I liked. Must go,
Ciao
Courtney. xxx

You just got to see me through another day
My body's achin' and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2004-12-12 03:50 AM

I Liked This, Alot, I Can Relate, Cause I'm In This Situation, Well, I Have Been For Awhile, But Now I'm Finding My Way Out Of It, and Thanx For All Your Posts, MY Writing Isn't NEARLY As Good As Yours, and Others on PIPTalk, But I Try...

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-12-12 04:57 PM

NOT boring, I liked it!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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