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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-12-09 12:25 PM

So much to gain
If a hot pan of lies were spilled
Running over to meet the soul of the world

That big empty thing
A zone of a dingy void
Where its so easy to take what isn't yours
And make someone else loose theirs
Stealing love and unfair pleasures
To unmasking a wicked masquerade of treasures

Sizzle sizzle
Crack it
Kill it
Feel your death
Rotting raw

Extra cash and lots of time
Private jets and luxury line
Very pretty, a touch indeed
This royal treasure for the Swine

Your beautiful glitter has lost its glow
Years of time and tears ago
The past will find its place to rest
Ferocious rebound of vicious test

Why you sit
Why still here
Why the screaming
The desperate smeer

Where are we
In this death
Rotten corpse and hurting breath
And you still just don't know why
Haven't figured it out
Don't have a clue
And your infection is you........

let God ROAR,... in power...

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2004-12-09 11:44 AM

NOW THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!!
Your defining moment, I believe, Craig! I truly love the three line intro! And then you deviate into a free, rhythmic poetic style, and I cannot even begin to pull out fave lines.
This was great!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-12-09 11:20 PM

Thank you Purity. I guess I was just thinking about the 'Some Can Attain Millions' gig.

-GIS

let God ROAR,... in power...

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

3 posted 2004-12-09 11:26 PM

"hot pan"??
"sizzle sizzle"??
seems your new job is already frying your brain...lol!!!!!
i'll have the smoked sarcasm, and let me watch you prepare it! hee hee...
congrats, and a good write. i'm just jovial this eve...

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-12-09 11:29 PM

you mean you're just a cool person.

-GIS

let God ROAR,... in power...

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