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PainBaneChaos
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since 2003-10-17
Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-12-08 07:06 PM


Tear-streaked face,
Mascara running.
A concerned glance here and there,
Stinking with pretense.

With a smile,
“Felling better?”

Every part of my mind,
Every last bit of life
I once though I controlled,
Wanted to scream “No.”

With every last ounce of breath,
Spill to someone,
Vent my frustration.
Cry to someone,
Who gives a damn,
Who understands.

“Yes.”

*more angst-witch than dark, but it's my trend as of late.*

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-12-09 12:53 PM


Yes, like an exasperated sigh.  Tension until the ultimate explosion whether in a percievable manner or in a baffling and uncomprehendable way that would leave you more confused than the blow itself.  Thats cool.  I like it.

-GIS

let God  ROAR,... in power...

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-12-09 11:26 PM


nice very nice

not much more i can say but very powerful and great


love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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