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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2004-12-06 09:54 PM


Laying under the sheets,
Fighting just to stay alive.
Breath after breath,
Getting shallower and shallower.
Wondering how this has all become,
A living nightmare.
Just leave,
I dont want you around,
You don't need to see me like this.
Faking every last word.
Lying between my teeth.
Hiding everything under the sleeves.
Pushing myself into a corner.
Laying within my sorrow.
Blood stained sheets,
Tear soaked pillows.
Laying there so lifeless.
Pale face, clamy skin.
I think im shutting down.

© Copyright 2004 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-12-07 12:10 PM


thats cool.  Putting this poem with the shadowy picture makes a sense of harmony in darkness.  wow thats awesome.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-12-08 11:19 PM


nice work
i can relate heaps

nice and dark hehe

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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