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What Do You Remember?
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What Do You Remember? |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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Oh weary wanderer, i must implore, among these dank oblivion shores, Think and feel it, let it roar, Just what do you remember? What rancid thoughts, forgotten, creeping, Leave you trembling and weeping? What memories from thy calm sleeping?, Haunt you this cold December? Chill you.. till you..cannot breathe, Lost memories remembered.. I speak of things your mind shall render, Lost dream moments of the nether, Stinging hard, like winter weather, Never seen before. "Deja Vu", indeed you call it, In sleep or consciousness you saw it, Uneasy feelings.. you recall it, That which you remember. Random, tandem, senseless moments of your dreams remembered.. Oh faceless wonder, of the flesh, forget this feeling of detest, This humming sting within thy breast, Which leaves your heart so reeling.. Forget, and let it be, Forget, This awful, awful feeling. These awful, wonderous, painful feelings... What did you remember? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Like a wave of sound. Chops so steady that its a solid piece and you can see beauty in it. Like an ocean wave. Wow this is the first time I've ever really felt what someone else's poem felt like almost like a piece of music. Wow that is so cool. This is an awesome piece for whatever reason I felt it. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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