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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I love you my friend I love you I could’ve said, instead Of… Ample conversation We talk and talk And yet we never speak our minds. Asking if everything’s ok I tilt my head a little to the left And nod with such enthusiasm, You let it go and let it rest. I never say anything that you don’t want to hear I hide the scars away so they don’t obstruct your sight You never say anything either We never ask each other why. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
why do we never ask why? a-hem. you need to knock some sense into this "wanka", there courts. if ya ever make it to the states, we'll have ta do a few shoots togetha... you rule, also! this was another jewel. of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
& not only why do we never ask why, but why do we fear the use of her first 3 words? Far, often, at least...until it's too late. Words to learn by, Hollow! Thanx! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Why do we stare without opening our mouths? So nicely written. I loved it. What a great way to show that using words helps to heal. *sighs* Thank you for the wonderful read. Love, Ladycat "Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
*does extremely proud face* aw courts, u r amazing! this was so good. i love your poems! DAMMIT I NEED TO SEE YOU! finally im on holidays now so we need to set a date. i dont want us to turn into the people in the poem! LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Though, the situation in your poem was very sad, I did enjoy reading your honesty expressed here and I do believe that honesty is sooooooo vital to any relationship. -Bob |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
dude this one rocked i have this feeling i know who this is about. not gunna say any more but yeah hmmm.... loved the ending it was awesome i loved it ahhh sosososososo much love and empathy always courts sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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