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jaxjoy
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since 1999-12-14
Posts 112
Texas

0 posted 2004-12-01 12:40 PM


It's been a very long time since I've been to passions. I penned this quickly after a drive home this evening. Cheeks still wet.
              

  HER

He never stops her as she turns to go
No coaxing nor coercing.
nor an echo of “don’t go”

She feels willing but not wanted,
on the silent shuffle homeward.

A journey she’s done for what seems
like endless times with endless cries.

She turned her back on all she had
and now is left with the passionless remains.

It’s night time and her cheeks are wet
again

It’s night time and she stares in silence
     again

Her spirit was murdered so long ago.
And each day plays like Act 1 scene 2.

She lets the memories grip her, grate her.
She lets in the noise and nuisance.

She feels nothing and like nothing
The woman she was is no more.

He could have grabbed her
He could have coaxed her, coerced her.
He could have
her


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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-12-01 02:57 AM


That printed out with a rose, wow.  Attatched with some ribbon.  Yeah, that would be cool.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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