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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-11-30 12:55 PM


the night covers my eyes
as i walk blindly into heartache
take this tissue soaked in blood
soaked in my heart
and wipe away the sweat from your brow
kiss me
and tear me limb from limb.

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-11-30 01:07 AM


omg. u r such an amazing writer! i love ur work so much. short simple but so amazing.

i remember ur poem i just need you, and that was so amazing i cant and never will forget it. this is just as good.

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

News_From_Nowhere
Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
2 posted 2004-11-30 01:26 AM


Yes!!!
Greatly Untitled!
& Even Greater Than Greatly Written!

Rider

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

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