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Missed My Train
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Missed My Train |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I cant see you All the mirrors in the world Have no reflection Stored for someone like me. No one can bear to stare back into These empty eyes, When it all changed I missed the “Would you like to stay?” sign When everyone climbed on that platform I missed the train taking my childhood away I never said good bye. I wasn’t ready. (I hate this, but I'm late for school and just wrote, so here it is, Bye!) I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey hehe i can see you right now! we're in english and yeah I can see you reading another poem. i liked it but yeah i can see it was rushed. idea was kinda vague but yeah it was alright.. 7/10 when your other ones 9 or 10/10 love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
hehe i'm in typing at this moment. i wish i cud see y'all. too bad, cuz that was a cool poem. i agree with sopho, and maybe u shud ya no go over it again? to make it better? later gator LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
hiya, stop yer sellin' of yerself short, thar sis... luv'd the "sign" part. seems we all 'ave our own signs to wear. mine says i'm jealous just a fair dinkum bit at yer 'avin made the seniors list. lol yer awesome! congrats! keep on a' keepin' on! of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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