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Scrambled Night
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Scrambled Night |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions bring machine minds to face Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions bring music to this place Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions your poetry at pace Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions show your black flowered lace Beautiful trees and grass for clothes Natural softness of the oceans flow Your sweet caress of the worlds romance Your greatest weapon I worship your lance Butterfly heart, butterfly heart propelling pictures from my mind I've cherished you from the start "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
This is one of those poems where I wish I could be a butterfly on the writers brain. I know this much, it sounds like something that needs to be sung! I'll respond more after I ponder it a bit. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
cool write, your words seemed to flow and spill out every word, i'll look out for more from you. "My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This one is like a soft trickle. Awesome as well. *dazed* -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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