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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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0 posted 2004-11-21 10:23 PM


Out of Season
        For K-


They didn't have any peonies
Peonies are a Spring flower
Her birthday is in November
Peonies remind her of her youth
The tree that bloomed outside her window
Or was it a bush?
So, I settled for a rose
A single red rose
The icon of love
My favorite
Not hers


The noblest battles are always fought in vain
-Cyrano de Bergerac

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-21 10:26 PM


I love your signature.  And the poem is awesome, I know she'll enjoy it.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-12-16 08:57 PM


aw, thats sweet... too bad she never read it

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-12-16 10:39 PM


Awwww. Sweet, maybe Lor, she did read it but couldn't find the words to reply.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Funny though, In NZ, November is in Spring.

You just got to see me through another day
My body's achin' and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way

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