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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-11-20 06:20 PM


Here I am again,
a-lying here without fear,
a-lying here in despair.
You're hanging your head in shame,
not willing to try again...

And you know,
But you won't,
you won't save me from myself.
And I'm done and I've  run
out of all my chances
you've got
left to give...

Have you just stopped caring?
Or simply grown
bored?
Of trying to find the answers
and finding a brick wall...

And you've given it all you've got.
And I've thrown it all away...
And now you know
And now you won't..
You won't, you won't, you won't...

And you know,
But you won't,
you won't save me from myself.
And I'm done and I've run
Out of all my chances
you've got
left to give...

And I'm done, and I've run.....

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

[This message has been edited by vampiana (11-21-2004 03:22 AM).]

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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-11-20 10:25 PM


i like it!

coooool!

im humming away in my own little tune to the repeated you wonts. i reckon thatd be a cool part in the song

LOR

your the only one keeping me alive

darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-11-21 03:20 AM


yeah it'd be an awesome song!!!

love it too

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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