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The man in the black coat
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The man in the black coat |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England 
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Im being held in place by the man in the black coat the pressure is all on my neck it hurts i try to scream and shout but my throut wont let it out i try to kick and punch the man in the black coat its hard hes strong and his grip is allmighty why do i feel in the wrong the man in the black coat is holding me in place taking from me all my colour from my face hes hurting me holding me down making me feel like the bloody clown hes holding me down the man in the black coat hes holding me down by my neck hes hurting my throat "My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hehe needed a pome like this, angry and dark. loved the hurt behind it, can relate with that feeling. *sigh* thanks for that, the knot in my stomach has released a bit. love and empathy sophie ill be looking for your name! nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
cool thankyou very much for you time love NightFall "My only love sprung from my only hate to early seen unkown and known to late" Romeo and juliet- William shakespere. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Kick that nasty man where it hurts. Then, while he's on his knees in agony, recite this poem to him, and laugh out loud with as much strangling power as your poem, and much more than his pathetic hands around your throat. Dark poem. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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