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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2004-11-20 07:45 AM



she claws
a dirt
clogged
messeage
into a
silent
surface
a shadow
passes over
the symbolic
gesture
the monster
rises
unaware
of it's
unholy
conjuration
moments
pass
with a
heightened
sense
of what
should be
and what
should be
released
from misery

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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
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1 posted 2004-11-20 11:49 AM


i'm never able to quite conjure up a response proper, ~k~. mercy i beg.english lax with words great enough to convey, so just one word:
beautiful.

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
2 posted 2004-11-21 03:33 AM


stunning ending.

powerful poem

perfect

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

muted
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3 posted 2004-12-09 11:00 PM


sometimes we are all too selfish to show mercy...

and sometimes, just too damned ignorant

..often, you just need to be blatant to recieve mercy...

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