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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2004-11-18 11:41 PM



You're so beautiful
You're so many
You're so repetitive
Until you're empty

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
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1 posted 2004-11-18 11:50 PM


ooooouuuuuccccchhhhh!!!
i would surely hope, dear friend, that this was not a treatise on the state of where... as far as all the poems of love and heartache (the beautiful).
could be seen as being tired of it, eh?

either way, it's an enigma of a great str8 to the point poem.

no pun intended.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2004-11-19 10:08 AM


I didn't write it with the poetry I see here in mind.  I wrote it after my friend dropped me of at my house and there were these girls in the back seat.  After a while its the same thing and it gets kinda boring.  Its almost like they loose what makes them people and they're just faceless beauty.  Thank you.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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