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PainBaneChaos
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The point of no return

0 posted 2004-11-18 09:28 PM


My best performance,
smile fixed in ice.
Hating everything I am,
and you.
Thoughts racing,
stomach turning,
an adrenaline rush each time
I see them.
Daggers thrust at every turn,
I can't move.
And I'm reminded.

It kills me to know
you're only here to show
everything I'll never have.


*Decidedly angst-bwitchy but I am allowed sometimes*

"World's use is cold, world's love is vain, world's cruelty is bitter bane; but is not the fruit of pain." Elizabeth Barrett Browning

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green_itchy_stuff
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1 posted 2004-11-18 11:35 PM


Then why wasn't the best the last, like a show where everything blows up at the end?  just playing.  lol

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

brezee
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2 posted 2004-11-19 12:05 PM


This is way cool...i like it a lot.

~*brezee*~

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3 posted 2004-11-19 08:02 PM


i can realte...nice write!

~Alli~

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PainBaneChaos
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The point of no return
4 posted 2004-11-19 08:06 PM


Thanks.  I don't know what made me want to drag this one out of the notebook.  A song by From Autumn to Ashes sparked it actually. Good band, I highly recommend them.

"World's use is cold, world's love is vain, world's cruelty is bitter bane; but is not the fruit of pain." Elizabeth Barrett Browning

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