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peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
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SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2004-11-17 05:08 PM


To you I am the enemy
attacking violently and strong.
A useless source of energy
where everything goes wrong.

To me I am the antidote
to a deadly disease.
A vision of what is yet to come;
someone you'll never believe.

I suffer from the pain you provide
I cringe at every sound, every sigh.
I hide from all the secrets you think I don't know,
but I smile, look away and keep it all on the downlow.

To you I am the deadly disease
eating away at reality.
A nightmare to the world
where nothing was meant to be.

To me I am the alli
picking through the remains.
A rebel suriviving obstacles,
trying to remember which way I came.

I suffer from the pain you provide
I cringe at every sound, every sigh.
I hide from all the secrets you think I don't know,
but I smile, look away and keep it all on the downlow.

To you I am hopeless, careless, dreamless, and empty.
That alone makes me your worst enemy.


"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

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News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
1 posted 2004-11-17 11:50 PM


Very kewl form transitions!
This was kwite original &
Thus, much enjoyed.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

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