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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2004-11-17 01:27 PM



Open it up
Write down the words whispered in my ear
On a new page predestined to live

Poetry of the spirit
Of which you for some reason give me the credit
Just because my hand is the first to write it
Doesn't mean it comes from me

Even though air is at first glance weightless
It does have weight
Even though air is clear, the clearest thing in the
World
Is just a  mixture of elements also too small to be seen

I've never seen the back of my head, but I know its there
I can feel it
Can't see the demon, the disease, or witchcraft
Clearly something hates me, causes sickness, and wants to
Stick around my family

So how can you say life is totally free will?
Of course it is
Events set up, a push here and there, the chemistry of good and
Bad

Different masses of elements, skin, bone, wood, stone
A perfect creation

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2004-11-17 11:39 PM


and a perfect love...

An excellent one, or dare I say "perfect"?


Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2004-11-18 12:49 PM


I'm not sure about perfect, more of an element of perfect.  lol.  Thank you.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
3 posted 2004-11-18 01:31 AM


"So how can you say life is totally free will?
Of course it is"

my, my, my...lol
i detect that some people are rubbing off on others.

you, in particular, have this effect, at least on me.
another awe inducing poem.

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2004-11-18 11:03 PM


thank you.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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