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vampiana
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-11-14 10:16 PM



Now I know the answer, it's over.
You're done with me
Just a tiresome buss, an irritating fly
Tapping your shoulder
Shock passes over your face when you see me.
"What is she doing here?" I see your mind ask
I thought she was gone, but now she's back
How I longed for your friendship
Endless discussions on this and that
I thought that there may have been a chance
But was sadly mistaken
Why'd you do this to me?
Don't you realise the pain you put me through?
How can you be so fickle?
Leaving me out on the road
While you drive alone to the sunset
Tears tumbling, as my hearts starts breaking
What can I do without you?
You're the light in my darkness
The world was a dizzying blue,
But it came clear, as you moved near.
NOw this is nothing and I truly fear
The next time I see you face,
But your face does not see mine.

*written AGES ago*

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2004-11-15 12:10 PM


I don't know if you can take whatever I have to say.  It is easier to pretend.  Nice poem.

-GIS

EveGnosis
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since 2002-02-21
Posts 300
New York, USA
2 posted 2004-11-15 12:52 PM


"it's never too late...
it's never too late...
to forgive and forget;
tell me that it isn't over...
tell me that it isn't over...
i'll never hold you again."

i always say to my soulmate, whether they know they are or not that "i can wait forever, if you say you'll be there too"

love vamp!

mp

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
3 posted 2004-11-15 01:07 AM


Ending killed me, sigh. Great poem, glad you can post everything here. Must go, must go...
Hollow.
CK.
(Crack up, not Calvin Klein guys!)

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

News_From_Nowhere
Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY
4 posted 2004-11-15 11:39 PM


If a fly ever taps me on the shoulder
It better have golden wings.

You are a mystery, Vampiana, my dearest.
Are these insights into biography?
Or insightful outlooks on others?

Either way, you speak from the depths,
And I love the realism. So, speak on.

Rider

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm"

vampiana
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere
5 posted 2004-11-15 11:52 PM


Basically all my poems are related to me. If they aren't I normally state it. lol

Thanks everyone for the replies!

you all rock!

Lots of love,
Kurst

"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

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