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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
A voice chanting in my head, "Peer pressure, peer pressure." Warning me away, despite of it I stay. Take a drag, fight a cough. Burning throat, "Shake it off." Intense thirst, spinning room, gnawing hunger, inhaling fumes. Scream in anguish, but they laugh. "She's just trippin'." nothing on my behalf. [This message has been edited by PainBaneChaos (11-15-2004 12:54 PM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Unless of course your first didn't burn, but still had the altering affect. Then it still burns just in a different way. =GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
What he said. Oh and, such a cool poem to read aloud. Hollow. CK. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Eh, that's a few experiences thrown in one. It is kind of fun to read aloud, isn't it? Especially if you do the "Peer pressure" part in the voice of a deranged chipmunk, as one of my friends does so often. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
ah..yes. I know whatcha mean...peer pressure is wrong, but it happens to the best of us..hahaha. Yeah, i knew exactly what you meant...the burning never stops...when i did it, it burned like hell, but it didnt compare to the guilt i had burning inside of me....great write... Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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