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EveGnosis
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0 posted 2004-11-12 11:53 PM


before the midnight hour tolls,
i have to get this in!
a toast for one from all, i say,
to celebrate my friend.
today, you see, he became a man
and a traveller as well.
soon he embarks upon good will
against all the whims of hell.
for hell hath no fury except to try
to belittle the few that are pure
and on this birthday of one empowered
no hell could your green plains endure!

happy birthday craig.


i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

© Copyright 2004 EveGnosis - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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1 posted 2004-11-13 12:02 PM


Wow dude, thats cool.  Thanks.  I must say it again.  You are awesome.  It is a nice poem and I take it as a present.  Thank you.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2004-11-14 12:01 PM


Now, that was extremely neat! And well done, Eve ta boot!
And this...
"soon he embarks upon good will
against all the whims of hell."
Awesome! Funny, though, you should use the traveller concept! (lol)

Seems I missed the fact that it was your birthday, Greeny...My sincerest apologies. Hope it was inspiring and filled with love and lots of happies...

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

Hollow_Emptiness
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3 posted 2004-11-14 01:45 AM


Great poem Eve.
Sorry, too am I Craig. Missed your birthday! Arrrghhhh sorry. Happy Birthday!

Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2004-11-14 02:34 AM


Now I have more replies than eve and he is the one that wrote it.  lol.  Thank you purity and Courtney.  Its cool because the majority of my friends are on-line in different states and it turns out you guys make up about half of them, maybe that isn't entirely corrext though because my church is ful of people that care about me too, nonetheless thank you again.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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5 posted 2004-11-14 06:14 PM


Nice write! and happy b-day craig!

~Alli~

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green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 2004-11-14 11:47 PM


Thank you Alli.

=GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

Hollow_Emptiness
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7 posted 2004-11-15 12:10 PM


That's cool. I have alot of friends here too. Hey guess what? You have a friend all the way down here in the pimple on Earth's butt, New Zealand. Lol.
Once again, Happy Birthday.
And I reread the poem Eve, it's so good, glad you posted it!
Courts.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
8 posted 2004-11-15 12:35 PM


That means I have two friends in New Zealand.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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