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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2004-11-12 02:37 AM



My fingers are made of flesh and bone
Happy at my birth

Here is the same death
Wearing a different face

Sanity loosely slides around and jiggles
And I forget

The words look so weird,
And where are the promises

Your demon casts its glance at me,
I just cover it up

The split ends are everywhere
My path is filleted repeatedly

LIke its puking on me
And I get dizzy

It all twirls
But I'm happy

Just a spark
Wishing I could understand

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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EveGnosis
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1 posted 2004-11-12 10:15 AM


so,freak, wash that puke off before you leave, and start anew. then there'll be a freak on each far end of these great states! lol
good one!

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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2 posted 2004-11-12 08:07 PM


"Your demon casts its glance at me,
I just cover it up"


Liked that part...great write!

Happy B-day! ^_^

~Alli~

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green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2004-11-12 11:36 PM


That is true eve.  A freak in NY(Psst, I think it means you.  hehehe), NC (the rare friend too often judged on early basis), Seattle... , and California altogether makes up another.  lol.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2004-11-12 11:39 PM


Garbage, I meant to reply to your reply too alli, but I guess my mind was in a hurry.  Yeah that demon is pretty cruel if hes free, lol.  And yeah today is my birthday so thank you.  I'm 21 now, and now that its legal I don't think I'm interested in alcohol anymore. lol.  Thank you again.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

EveGnosis
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5 posted 2004-11-12 11:45 PM


so in the truest of spirit of Noah, I'll have a drink for ya!!!!
happy birthday, ya freak!!!!!!!
paul says that drinking in and of itself is not a sin, but it doeth cause one to be unable to bridle that tongue.
drink a glass of "i'm going to seattle juice", and leave the devine wine to me...
21...remember it well. it was the day i realized that i had accomplished my thespian goals. so now what? i guess i seek a purity of life these days...
again, i celebrate your day of birth

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 2004-11-13 12:00 PM


I guess alcohol makes me nervous.  My father is an alcoholic and has been since I was born and I know how the generational thing goes... I do feel like I am finally becoming me though.  Thank you at 21.  But I think you've found your purity.  

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

PainBaneChaos
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7 posted 2004-11-13 08:27 PM


I think just about everybody loses interest in aclohol at twenty one, there isn't that sense of accomplishment and danger at doing something illegal, takes all the fun right out of it. Anyway, as always, loved the poem. Happy belated I guess I should throw in.

It's not the letting go that hurts, it's the holding on.

green_itchy_stuff
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8 posted 2004-11-13 10:11 PM


Well my lack of interest isn't because of the lack of danger or anything like that.  Its mainly because now I'm saved and my body is now the temple dwelt in by the Holy Spirit.  And yeah maybe a few drinks are cool, but I'd rather not.  I don't judge anyone else for it though.  Thank you for the belated thing.  Its pretty sweet.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

PainBaneChaos
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9 posted 2004-11-13 10:45 PM


Aww, thanks, I think that's the first time anyone ever had the guts to call me sweet.  And hey, if the acoustic guitar and being saved thing works for you, rock on.  I probably wouldn't try it out in a big city but then again I'm not you. And I'm a chic, so that doesn't help things.

It's not the letting go that hurts, it's the holding on.

green_itchy_stuff
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10 posted 2004-11-13 11:14 PM


A chick no one has ever had the guts to call sweet.  Thats cool.  Sweetie.  lol.

-GIS

Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head.  Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a

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