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Dark Poetry #4

Unanswered Truth

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2004-11-11 02:54 AM

I drank until the winter moon,
Gave a ring to thy garden,
To catch the quilt of the wind.

Seasons were distant,
Such like the doors,
Ever big and ageless.

Life ran through time,
So this child listened to the fading bells,
To read and discover the games of pipes and dreams.

The heart was tested,
The test of tearing trough the tears,
So magic can find your eyes as it spins around Jupiter.

To wake in the light,
Leave the blankets wrapped under my skin,
As the learning of forgetting is driven past the shadows.

I married my wisdom,
Remembered the hardships,
Then left it all for a cloud of nirvana.

The diaries of words that embarked me,
Like scripts written by ghosts to one another.

I walked outside,
Leaving my notebook far behind.

A smile once wide, doesn’t carry the truth anymore.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-11-11 06:16 PM

hmmmm..im not sure what to think. I like it, and the imagery and everything was good, it was just hard for me to understand...its prolly just me though. Great write over all though.

Kissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

2 posted 2004-11-12 01:54 AM

WOW (times a million) this is really good

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

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