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Dark Poetry #4

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click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2004-11-10 09:09 PM

No do overs,
No nostalgic, remember whens,
No shared tears,
No shared laughter,
No hopeless,romantic,jestures.
No dignity
Just brutaly,bluntly,over.

Without a word spoken,
to each other.

So be it.

Click the switch.

I am done.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-11-11 06:14 PM

now, this one i really like. It was good, and i understand it, and can relate and i dunno. I like the ending.

Kissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-11 08:47 PM

"Without a word spoken,
to each other.

So be it.

Click the switch.

I am done."

Like this poem...especially the above part. Nice job!!

~Alli~

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