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Dark Poetry #4
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click1
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0 posted 2004-11-10 09:03 PM



I can no
longer
keep these
images
intact

fragmented
fadied
without
your voice

Click
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kissa~rachelle
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1 posted 2004-11-11 06:13 PM

hmm..im not sure about this one. It was good, but it was really short, and i dunno. I just thik it could be better..but maybe its just me.

Karissa

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I find i cant really rely on myself.
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2 posted 2004-11-11 08:49 PM

like kissa said, it was kinda short...i want more!! lol....great job anyways.

~Alli~

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