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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-11-10 12:44 PM


I want to scream your name
And rip away your face
So your eyes can see all of me
Not just my skin

I want you to grow up
Get a life
Can’t you see I notice?
The snipes you pass at me?

I want to leave you alone
Let you see I don’t care
But that wouldn’t be very friendly of me
And the regret would be too much
When I’m alone

I want their attention
Focused on me, miserably
Instead of
Vice versa

I want to stop writing
About how I hate
I want to stop telling you
About how I wish I were different
But somehow it’s never enough
I keep forcing the point

I want to stop hating
Everything.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

© Copyright 2004 Courtney - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-11-10 01:05 AM


:'(

i want you to stop hating everything as well, cause that means u hate me. PLEASE DONT!

becuz if u hated me, i wudnt read ur poems, and id miss out on something as amazing as this.

Woah girl.. WOAH.

it made me very sad. id cry if i wasnt as bloated from my dinner

LOVE YA

LOR

your the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-11-11 01:39 AM


I don't hate you! God no. I don't, I swear. I tell myself I don't hate people, that I just don't like them much, what really have they done to me?
Hate is a powerful word, and in my opinion, used too casually. Like...love.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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