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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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her heart is bleeding right in front of him and he doesn't notice that the blood is bled for him the cuts on the arms for him the tearstained pillow for him she lives for him and she'd die for him *wrote this one in english today... see if you like it. the person who i showed it to didnt, so i want to see your points... ones i can trust are genuine. your the only one keeping me alive |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
omg...omg..omg...i can't breathe...that was so brilliant...that is just completely and utterly my situation i am in with this guy..i think thats why it struck a chord with me so badly..i am crying that was so awesome..and just..thats just..HOW DID YOU GET INTO MY HEAD??? in awe.. saving..and printing it out to. Lots of love, Kurst "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Who the hell did you show it too? This is sad. They never notice, and when they do, it's too late. In whatever situation. "Dearly beloved, are you listening?" Nup. Their not. Soz, random little outburst. "You need an antidote, but I only have a poison." Struck me, sadly. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
OMG i LOVE it, i can soooooo relate, GREAT write Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
idk why that person didnt like it...i love it! it's an awesome write! so sad though... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow, maybe its jst cuz im just really emotional right now but i really liked this. It sort of made me cry...lol (like i said, emotional) I'm just sort of trying to stop feeling a feeling i have for someone, and its really hard....and i see him everyday, and yeah, this poem just erally hit me hard. I liked it a lot. Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
now i know why this poem affected me so much...you had actually written it FOR me, ABOUT me...thanks lor...you wrote what I've been trying to put into words for months. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
fluckin hell "are those tears sophie?" "no, just my contacts i swear" dude thats me. right there. whod u show it to? cus honestly they dont know talent, beauty, pain or any of dat crap i loved this printing it out and sticking on my wall mwahaha i love you and this poem more than anything love and empathy always hun darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
whoever you showed this to, clearly hasn't been through it. because, i can relate. but I'm over being like that.. and if you're going through this, trust me.. it'll get better. I loved it. it's really sad, but soooo true. great job. Becca. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Whoever you showed this amazing and emotonial pecie of art to is a ...a taste less critic (niceest thing i could say they get worse!) Abbeon |
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