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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2004-11-08 04:22 AM


What Really Hurts Me Is That You Broke My Heart
I Was A Good Girl, You Had No Right
Now Look At What I've Become
No Better Than You
I Hate You
More Than That, I Hate
Myself
The Fact That I've Become
Something Worst
Have I Changed?
Or Am I Being My True Self?
All These Doubts
All The Questions
I Need Answers
I Need To Find Myself

Fake

All I've Been
All I Ever Will Be
Unless I Let Go Of The Past
Accept My Mistakes
Learn From The Lessons
Enbrace Everything
Good And Bad
So I Can Finally Be Free
Finally...
Me

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

© Copyright 2004 TrinaMarie73 - All Rights Reserved
silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-12-12 01:52 AM


WOWOAH! no replies? i couldnt believe it. this was sooo good, especially the first two lines. GREAT stuff, you are a really good writer

LOR

you're the only one keeping me alive

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-12-12 04:54 PM


Omg!! Very emotional write!! I love this!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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