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vampiana
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Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-11-08 03:17 AM


Sitting alone in the cold dark depths of my mind
Each open door I approach, slams closed in my face.
The gushing wind blowing my hair back
Shivering, I scamper back in the dark
and plaster a smile as my clone emerges.
The setting has changed, people surround
Chatting, laughing, with the blankest of eyes
Mine too are blank, for we are all clones.
Ourselves are locked, hidden away.
Who knows the consequence of revealing
Your true self, your true feelings.
In a world of pretending, in a world of imposters.
Letting one person free, would be the apocolypse.

*Yeah, I forgot I'd written this, I found it scrunched up at the bottom of my bag, and thought "what the hell? i might as well just post it."*


"I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson

© Copyright 2004 Kirsty - All Rights Reserved
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
1 posted 2004-11-08 04:31 AM


I For One, Am Glad U Posted It, I Love It, Its So Honest and The Sad Truth, as They Say....Great Poem

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2004-11-08 06:37 PM


this is so true vamp... i to am glad you posted this gem.... keep them coming...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

PeaceInEverything
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 31
Ohio, United States
3 posted 2004-11-08 11:20 PM


"Shivering, I scamper back in the dark
and plaster a smile as my clone emerges."

I know how this feels.  Oh do I know.  The pain... but I loved it.  I remember with relish those days I could scamper back.  I wish I had this recourse but my smile was shattered and I am just now trying to fix it.

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
4 posted 2004-11-09 01:04 AM


awesome dude!

wow i love how you just find them in your bag... they are always goodies. hehe

kudos dude

LOR

your the only one keeping me alive

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
5 posted 2004-11-09 02:47 AM


"If the apocolypse comes, beep me."

Don't know where that came from. Random memory, sparked by that line.

"The setting has changed, people surround
Chatting, laughing, with the blankest of eyes"
Someone told me today, I lost my sparkle. Reading this....they are the ones without their sparkle. Arrrggghhhh random. Love this though.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2004-11-09 06:50 PM


Me glad you posting it too!
lol...i just love ur poems...always an awesome read!

~Alli~

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